优秀的网文。

优美的语言,多线细致的剧情设计,立体的人物群像是其优点。

值得一看。

个人认为主要有两点:

第一点不能说是缺点,只能说是特色,就是主角的性格特点鲜明,并不是传统意义上的完人,而且从一个自我的性格向心怀天下的家国情怀的转换不尽完善,但也不算突兀。比起其他的小说显得更加的真实,但是略微损失了一些最后的升华。显得有一点点小气。但是文中也有夫子与大师兄,二师兄的心怀天下的人物存在,所以说并不会显得非常的突兀。

第二点则是剧情的分配问题,在后面三个大章节两位主角共同度过的阴暗时光有点过于长而且特别黑暗了,读者会觉得有点过于无聊,而且也不符合网文一贯的节奏,甚至在最终的立意上也没有什么肉眼可见的提升。

希望猫腻作者能够为我们带来更加优秀的作品。

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